You need some sound. Try grabbing something from the audio portal. Anything but silence. Maybe some jungle sounds and birds would help. Clouds scrolling up when the ball falls would look nice too. Do these things and your score will go up. Good luck.
It was pretty good for your second flash. You just need to tweak your graphics. I'd make the helicopter blades move and throw in some different angles. If you need help just email me or get some help from the guys in the flash forum. Good luck on your future work.
This is a great first flash. I was very impressed by the time and effort you put into this flash. Please email me so I can help you with your latest work. firstname.lastname@example.org
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That's good flash. You graphics were nice and clean. You did a good job of compressing your flash from 1600kb to 393kb too. I noticed when Awesome Man is flying the clouds were scrolling to the right. It would have been better if they scrolled to the left. The blinking for the singer should only cover his eyes. I noticed his sideburns vanishing when ge did blink. Well these are just small details to make your animation even better. Good job overall.
Hmm, I never noticed these glitches! I can't fix them though, I lost the .fla :P
Game of Death
I'm a huge Bruce Lee fan and you failed to tell viewers that you just rotoscoped parts of Lee's last film Game of Death. The first fighter was Dan Inosanto and the last one was Kareem Abdul Jabbar. Bruce never wore those style sunglasses and he would never approve of tracing over his old films. Make something new. Bruce was an innovator, not an imitator. Good luck on the next one. Everyone watch Game of Death and you will understand my critical judgement.
Good flash! I like the hand drawings and the music goes well with the story. Keep it up.
This is a good flash. I liked the breakdancing and the music fit great. This deserves a much higher score, at least 3.68. A lot of effort was put into this work. Good job!
I like this flash. It was well executed and the sequences of it running backward was very creative. I love work like this because it inspires other flashers to improve their art. This is a great entry to the portal and I see it in the top 50 of all time easily. The daily feature is a sure thing. Great job. I better get working on mine now.
I don't think you did enough research. Statues of Jesus and the Virgin Mary are not considered idol worship for Catholics. Not all priests are pedophiles. You can get scripture and twist it.
The sign of the cross represents the Holy Trinity.
And the use of holy water is not really showing off. If you have questions ask a priest. Trust me..99% of them are good people who try to make a difference. Good luck to you.
Not enough research? I went to Catholic school, had the usual Catholic brainwashing, went through 1st Holy Communion and Confirmation, so I'm not just making up stuff. I'm telling from my own experience from listening to those Catholic teachers and priests. God said no idols. What do you think an idol is? Putting statues of saints, Jesus, and Mary in church is blasphemous. It's not what I said, it's what God said, according to the Bible. Ya, I know the sign of the cross means "father, son, holy spirit". I'm not saying it's just one bad thing, it's numerous bad things that all point to one direction. You don't get it do you? Being "good" people isn't just following the rules of man's society, it's obeying God's word in the Bible (if you are Christian). If you're not Christian, then ya, it's perfectly understandable why you don't really care about the Bible. Do you think it was fair when God ordered the man gathering wood on the Sabbath to die? I'm sure he was a nice man who just wanted to get some wood, but because he disobeyed, he was sentenced to die. When God had Noah build an ark before the flood, only 8 people were saved. Everyone else God chose to kill. Not because they were all disgusting in the sense that humans think. They were just eating, drinking, marrying, and minding their own business. Sweet old grandmothers and little children did die in the flood because they did not listen to God and his word. And I never said anything about Catholics being bad. It is said that a lot of them will see the truth when it is time or if God calls them.
It has promise but it looked funny when the debris fell on the guy. And maybe not using stock sounds from flash because they don't sound great. Stick with sound effects from other sites. Good luck.
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